Step one in bringing this landing page to life was evaluating the overall narrative, its organization and length. In order to evaluate, I organized all of the initial page content into a low fidelity page layout, and then proposed several reductions in section organization and copy length.
In the second design you can see compromises made to revise the initial proposal, with room to edit down to keep the page length as short as possible. We agreed to reduce the copy length of the content, although in this draft, the hero area was still very large contributing to page length.
Initial considerations and proposal to project stakeholders